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Old 01-22-05, 08:20 PM   #21
Parallel
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Pleim:
uh your verse wasnt that great there might have been good stucture but you made it that way by using.................thats dumb dont do that the vocabulary was weak and you didnt have a very good punch and twist to yoru verse to actually diss Konflicks try using metaphores and punches to diss him to win...no hate

Konflicks:
not the best from you cuz the stucture was weak but your punches were creative and you used metaphores to express them...the vocab wasnt there but you had a better twist to using something close....the emotion off the punch was good i jsut felt you got this...pz

Opener: K
closer: K
vocab: K
metas: K
punches: K
stucture: P
flow: P
win/ Konflicks
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