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Old 01-22-05, 09:06 PM   #11
Parallel
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J.R freeze
man your stucture made my eyes bleed dont put all them ~~~ in it that dosent show anything....a perfect example for good stucture is skriptz do it like that i know your gonna say you do multis and thats your style but it dont make a differentce you can use multis the way skriptz writes his verse it just depends on your stucture you have set and how many lines you use to make it flow...but next is your punches they were weak and i didnt see any creative metas there...not feeeling your verse alot...but if you understand what i ment with my feed you could elevate...no hate pz

Skriptz:
not your best but i can see why.....you had creativty and good emtas in there very good stucture and flow so it all worked for you..nothing different tho from you skriptz....but jsut keep doing yo thang...you got this...

opener: S
closer: S
vocab: J.R
metas: S
stucture: s
flow: s
punches: s
win/ Skriptz
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