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IP:
Voted For: •Para¶el•
decent topical battle here...
Parallel:
your vocab was good here, pretty much good story on this piece...flow was good, structure wasn't stretched overall nice story though, had a good topic
Damian:
your story was aight too, nuttin much on this one though, you had a good vocab, and the structure wasn't all stretched all over the place, and the flow was good too, but i felt that ur story on the topic wasn't as good as Parallel's though..
NO HATE TO BOTH....JUST MY OPINION
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