Voted For: shadow

mista: shit was nice. Had mad feelin n plot. Some shit most cats can relate to. lines were a liiittle stretched... but still cool. vocabulary could have been used better. But other than that nice verse. structure was good.

shadow: vocab was better than mistas. A more general way to approach the topic, but it was done in a nice emotional tone. I was kinda feelin this more for some reason. Just seemed a little more polished and professional.

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