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Voted For: Plutonium
Skriptz
Who the hell are you? This homo says he’s good, stick to what you do
You can jock anyone’s name, and still no one will even know you
^okay opener
You claiming you hard, but I already know that your soft man
Your rhymes are just coming up short, like Gary Coleman
^hehe,good one!
Plutonium can’t even have the knowledge if you went left, and I told you…
…to go right
If you thought you was the best in owning, you couldn’t even own this site
^nice nice
This homo’s lines is whack, and stretched more than rubber bands
Plutonium could let his punches fall from a building, and they still wouldn’t land
^mad played but still cool
Vocab was good, flow n structure were tight.Had some good hardhitting punches in there, here and there it was a bit played though but still,solid drop!Wordplay was cool to but seen better from you in fact...
Plutonium
skriptz attempts to earn the "w"...but initially ain't a good sport
his biting & all his "copping"...is just a couple of doughnuts short
^decent opener
all the attempted racism...just get off the crack you fighting with
kid can't make a hit...even if he fell off the horse he came riding in
^nice bar
born to lose...skripts probably was once jumped by kid hackers
put his computer's CPU in a bird...it would probably fly backwards
^good good
in a switch, I'd rip da shit outta this bitch...you might as well die kid
his old name was Sik with it...explains why his sik rhymes is also considered old shit
^haha,cool closer!
Better vocab, structure was good but wasn't always feeling your flow in fact...Had some good creative punches n personals in there, wordplay was nice to and overall, good job!
Close battle but I'm going with Plutonium, no hate but I was just feeling his verse a little more. Felt he had more creativity in his verse but both did a good job!
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