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Old 01-23-05, 06:46 AM   #9
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Voted For: InTeGrA

SQUAD-UPpener was good but the ending was weak.Vocab was okay,structure n flow were cool.Had some good punches in there, quite creative with good wordplay but nothing really hardhitting though.

ya verse is pretty poor, give u a D on prose
and u aint no Integra, look more like a Geo homes
u must b left handed, cuz dog u aint comin right
n the wit on ya punches is as sharp as a butter knife
^best lines

InTeGrA: stayed consistent throughout entire battle in fact, had bold punches and personals, good multis here and there which improved your flow. Vocab was better to, nice wordplay. Structure was decent.

Dawg your reputation is square, like your pink "ipod"
Somebody look at the size of his nose, it looks like zeus's lightning "rod"
^liked em...

Good job from both of you but I go with Integra on this one...no hate and return the favor please...
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