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Old 01-23-05, 07:32 AM   #11
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Voted For: WerdSmith

Element

First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
^hehe,good opener

Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piƱata
^decent one

Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
^okay closer

Started nice but kinda fell of towards the end and with 6 line battle, you should be able to stay consistent.Vocab and structure were good, was feelin ya flow. Some good punches in there but nothing extremly hardhitting,overall good drop though!


WerdSmith

I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
^decent opener

On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
^nice one

Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
^haha,good closer

Stayed on top of it throughout the entire battle,nice wordplay that made me laugh here and there.Structure n vocab were tight and ya flow seemed okay to me. You said it yourself,no personals whatsoever but your punches were indeed nice...Solid drop!


Vote goes to WerdSmith cause he had some funny things in his verse but it was close battle though. No hate, return the favor please...
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