Voted For: MaRVJay1009

aite dis is how i see it...
its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag?
nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag"
^1st line, 4/10 no punch, 2nd line 6/10 hard punch.

admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week......
when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH"
1st line again justa set up for 2nd line 3/10..2nd line gd wordplay but eh not hard 5/10

u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me
i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........
again notha set up 1st line 3/10 2nd line decent

your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL....
u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell"
gd bar decent punch gotta giv it 6/10.

i bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE..
plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME"
1st line waz decent not a direct punch, 2nd line gd play on hiz crews name 7/10

Overall marv u had a solid drop so i think u won dis u were more consistent and complex compared 2 poetry2abeat RTF in my sig u kno how it iz.

your hated at this site so its best you leave,
you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves,
[B]no hard punch 2/10
after reading what i wrote you wished you declined,
your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind,
Not a gd set up, but 2nd line waz shaky, kinda played BUT decent

couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak
cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats,
Wack meta in da 1st line, 2nd line IS PLAYED AS FUCK

marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject,
like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect,
1st line is fake, how can u b a reject??2nd line decent

having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling,
but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling"
[B]1st line waz jus WACK,2nd line not bad gd meta

Overall not very gd, u shud do poetry cuz u realli need 2 elevate, no hate, but u werent as hard hitting az marv...
RTF MARVJAY

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