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Old 01-23-05, 08:11 AM   #23
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Voted For: Killa Mane

Dio Deus

This probably gon' be a "motherfuck your mother battle"
cause you a beginner while my spits are lethal
^doesn't do the trick

you get fucked up harder then the kids in michael jacksons bedroom
Don't drop your verse you'll make it worse you don't have too
^good one!

no personals or wordplay needed, to defeat you
the victory there ain't votes need to see who's...........
^decent

^^ They are needed in fact...Vocab n structure were good, definately feeling your flow. 2nd bar was nice but the rest was kinda weak and with a 6 line battle, you have to drop fire throughout whole thing! Keep on battling and read other battles to get better...no hate though...


Killa Mane

Dio receive's 'Killa' anal, like he waz hit on by a gay convict.
Clearly ya initial's say it all, ya hopeless with ya 'Blind' spit's.
^hehe,funny...

DD's hungry, cos he didn't even know what 'feedin' meant.
Got a ghostwriter?..well judgin' by ya battle's, it's ain't 'cash well spent'.
^nice one

Kid enjoy's daisy chain's, but even his homo-erotic pal's think he the weakest link.
Cuz your rhyme's are more horrible & ghastly than 'Monster's Ink'.
^haha,dope closer

Props to you, good battle...Vocab was tight, structure was good and ya flow was straight on point.Had some creative punches in there,mad hardhitting personals and funny wordplay. Nice job man!
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