First my Fav Lines

Cali:

Blood puddles the ground like lakes of cherry ink stains
Crumbling buildings fall on children who cross in thier lane

King Dipset:
But I never Seen The Liberty and justice Stood absent
when I needed it most it Just Turned away with Passion

Cali had better imagery which made the poem come alive, king dipset yours was like looking through a window, but emotion was better than CALIs. But overall Cali had the most enjoyable poem so :

\\//ote = CALI

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