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Old 01-23-05, 09:31 AM   #11
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Voted For: Black Queen

One-sided...this goes to Black Queen, hands down...

Cinnamon20ohio: fix your structure first of all so it's easier to read. Wasn't feeling your flow,vocab was good though.Didn't have any hardhitting punches or personals whatsoever, used self-glorification which is a big no-no in fact.No hate though but this was weak, read other battles to see how to improve your structure first of all...

Black Queen: not the best verse I've seen from you but that's good cause it had just been a waste of time anyway...Had some good punches in there,nothing extremly hardhitting though.Vocab,flow n structure were straight on as usual. Some nice wordplay in there to. Overall solid drop, definately deserve the win.

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