Voted For: final

Untraceable: Nice multis, kept the flow going. Structure was good as well. Imagery was ok, but not as good as final. The story line was good as well. Another ironic ending. Your rhyming felt forced sometimes though.

Final: Imagery was pretty good, I could see this story in real life, probably because it has happened. Vocab wasn't as good as your previous battles, but overall ok. Story line was pretty good, I like the ironic ending, always fun to laugh at people when they get what they deserve. Work on more multis. FLow was good as well.

Overall I felt final took this, his story line and imagery was better, and his rhyming wasn't as forced as Untraceable's felt to me.

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