Thread: Epic vs Empire
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Old 01-23-05, 12:08 PM   #11
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Voted For: Empire

Close battle!

Epic

His Imaginative Scheme Of Beating Me Is Like Walt Disney
Coz This Kid Get's Abused Daily How Bobby Hit's Whitney
^cool opener

Call Me An Emperor How I'm Owning This Kid Empire
I'll Whipe His Entire Career Coz C.A.L.I's Help Can't Amplify~Ya
^not feelin it

Kid's Skill Is A Retards Walking On A Tight Line At The Circus
I Burn His Fuel Out, So Like Gas Stations He's Out Of Service
^nice one

Kid Is So Whack.........That His Name Had To Be All Stolen
His Rhyme Scheme Is Shit, It Came Straight Out Of Is Collin
^decent decent

Like Fab He Has To Breath Coz I Left His Chest All Swollen
A Toy At The Store He Was Playable So Now I Own Em
^like the closer

Overall solid drop. Vocab n structure were tight and I was feeling your flow. Had some good punches and personals in there,sometimes bit played though. Wordplay was good,some creativity here and there.Keep at it...


Empire

Establishing my might, but epic cant handle da punches....
Like endurance tests wit fat bitches performing crunches...
^no punch but good wordplay

Too hot for Epic, Den stay away from dis candle..........
Call me a toddler, w/e u bring will b like a toy 4 me 2 "Dismantle".
^nice one

U got Fab in Ur avy, but i cud giv u "street dreams" by layin u out on da curb.
I mean shit,u MUST b dreaming of beatin me...its JUST absurd.
^hehe,like it

Ur alias is Hip Hop, well one swinga dis punch will make ur kidney pop.
An' yeah Epic can "pack heat" problem is hes lost da key 2 da lock!
^1st line bleh,2nd good

Punches rock ur jaw, leave u wit fragile & lopsided expression..
Epics skillz descend & r not nessasary like business men @ da WSDepression!
^hah,dope closer

Good job man! Had mad creative punches, some personals and flow was on lock. Vocab n structure were straight to the point, good wordplay, made me laugh here and there...
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