Thread: Epic vs Empire
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Old 01-23-05, 01:07 PM   #14
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Voted For: Epic

Normal Punches-Epic, harder hitting and more of them. No self glorifying either. Empire, ok punches, but you self glorified which doesn't count, and brings down the verse.

Personal Punches-Tie, both had one, and both weren't that strong.

Metaphors-Epic, not that great metas, but more original than Empire's. Empire, ok metas, but not that original or hard hitting.

Multiple Rhymes-Neither

Structure-Epic, barely got this. Try to not use ......... and ~ to make it work. Empire, too many stretched lines, and too many ......

Flow- Epic, punches just kept flowing, did fall off much. Empire, fell of at the end, and a little in the verse.

Word Play- Neither

Epic- not your best verse, but you won it. Your punches kept coming and that's what won it. Use more wordplay and try more personals.

Empire- One of your best verses, but not good enough. Try better personals and try more wordplay.

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v/Epic

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