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IP:
Voted For: Epic
Normal Punches-Epic, harder hitting and more of them. No self glorifying either. Empire, ok punches, but you self glorified which doesn't count, and brings down the verse.
Personal Punches-Tie, both had one, and both weren't that strong.
Metaphors-Epic, not that great metas, but more original than Empire's. Empire, ok metas, but not that original or hard hitting.
Multiple Rhymes-Neither
Structure-Epic, barely got this. Try to not use ......... and ~ to make it work. Empire, too many stretched lines, and too many ......
Flow- Epic, punches just kept flowing, did fall off much. Empire, fell of at the end, and a little in the verse.
Word Play- Neither
Epic- not your best verse, but you won it. Your punches kept coming and that's what won it. Use more wordplay and try more personals.
Empire- One of your best verses, but not good enough. Try better personals and try more wordplay.
No Hate Just An Honest Voter
v/Epic
One Vote, One Battle, One Win.
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