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Old 01-23-05, 03:13 PM   #9
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Plutonium
i liked your verse in all but you lacked being more creative then skriptz was i just thought you didnt write with more metas then skriptz did your vocab was weak actually boths were but your stucture might have been good and the flow was good i jsut thought you lacked punches to win this...you did have punches just not hard ones a few funn y lines with horses n shit liked that if you woulda done more ounches liek that you probably woulda won...no hate pz

skriptz:
your verse had more punches and metas to win this all tho your stcute was weak your punches and flow were good the vocab was weak but so was his...i jsut thought you had more funnier lines then him with a meta in each one so it was very creative and won you this...pz

opener: P
closer: S
metas: S
punches: S
stucutre: P
flow: tie
win/ Skriptz
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