not quite emotionally there, and i didn't really like the lyrics besides the chorus because of that... what i did like is that it all kinda flowed together because you were mellow, and it kept gettin better as the song went on and it wasn't short so it ended up being pretty dope. begining could be done a lil better is all i think if you like the mellow sense of the song....just doesn't really jump off good at the beginning... prolly cuz you talk about all that gay shit, thats hard to feel.


EDIT:
on the real, i was now just listenin to more of your shit, and that "beats or pussy" song or w/e is fuckin dope.... it jumps right into it after a funny intro, that you relate back to...clever shit... and this is hella more relatable than that gay shit you was spitton on the other song, "bitch like an email, i read 'em then delete 'em" some good shit in this song, funny with the lead back into...."woah hold up, i was talkin bout pussy"...some funny shit, definately feelin this song more.