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Voted For: Skriptz
Skriptz
Alright Kid Decent Verse, You Had Some Well Vocabulary In Here, Structure Was Kind Of Off But, Punches Made Up FOr It, Had Some Multi's Not To Much In A Few Bars, Personals Was Decent...Over All Just Work On Structure Basically And You Good Man....8.5/10
Plutonium
Could Of Bin Better, You Had A Decent Structure, So You Won In That Category, Punches Was Alright But Skriptz Went Harder, Also Vocabulary Wasn't To Great, You Need Work On That....Add Some Multi's In Here Also And It'll Help Out You Rhyme Scheme Which Both Needs Work On....OverAll
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