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Voted For: Golden shellz
Reason I Voted For Golden Shellz Is Coz His Structure Was There Along With Some What Rhyme Scheme And His Punches Where Decent Came Clean His Vocabulary Was Neat Some Decent Ish, Also Coz His WordPlay Came Out Better Sounding One Of The Thing Opponent Did Not Have, He Had Some Multi's Here That Was Decent And You Need To Add More Meta's In You Verse But Overall...8/10
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Wow Your Structure Needs Alot Of Work And Punches Was Weak
I Mean There Was Nothing There, You Rhyme Scheme Needs Work And You Have Basic Vocabulary Through Out Your Whole Verse....
WordPlay Needs Alot Of Help And Add Some Multi's And Meta's Here It'll Do Good
Goldne Shellz Return The Favor..Link In Sig Preferebly Me Ve Empire
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