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Old 01-23-05, 05:10 PM   #15
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze


J.R.
Wow This Battle Was One Sided
Vocabulary-J.R.
Strcture-J.R.
Punches-J.R.
Worplay-J.R.
Rhyme Scheme-J.R.

Bacially J.R.'s Verse Came Out Harder Through Out The Whole Thing It Never Fell Of Once Had Multi's Really Enjoyed This Verse, One Of The Best Lyrcist On Rv,

Phive, You Need Elivation Try Reading Some Tutorials And Battles To Help You Out, Also Add Multi's And Meta's In You Verse

Over All J.R. Got My Vote One Sided Battle, On Punches Vocabulary, Meta's Multi's And Rhyme Scheme....

Vote-J.R.

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