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Voted For: Nemesis
Nemesis
Alright You Elivated Alot Man, Some Deceont Vocabulary In Your Verse I Was Feeling, You Had Some Good Personals Here,
Like The Bomber Z Closer Nice Use Of His Name, Opener Was Alright Not To Great But Decent, Rhyme Scheme Needs A Little Work But Other Then That Your Good....8/10
Hells Fire
Vocabulary Was Plain And Basic, Punches Wasn't To Great Just An Newbie Verse, You Need Help On Alot Of Ish Check Out The Tutorials
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