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Old 01-23-05, 06:19 PM   #11
50hater_killer
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Voted For: dOpEbOi 210

HAVE TO GO WITH dope he did not have two lines rhyming again, I liked his flow his personels where ok but both need to work on it iight. and the opener-closure goes to him and the rhyming and the multis and the vocab a lil this is what helped him!

nigga think he witty wit a name like ebonicz
but u couldnt spit intelligent if u was hookd on phonix
he mighta won 1 more battle..but shit,dats irrelevant
rememba this loss wen u got grand children, so ull b able to tell-of-it
nigga get no play but his excuse is celibacy
im more hardcore den bondage porn..so watch how u comin-at-me
5/10
rt the fav in my links