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Old 01-23-05, 09:12 PM   #12
Parallel
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shadow:
man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv eseen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativty a bit there was a few good emtaphores but nothign so creative you know i jsut felt it lacke dthat..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man

Mista_authentiq
that was pretty good man you elevated alot your vocab was alot bettter then shadows and your stucture and flow is alot better now..the creativty and metas were there seen alot of imagery there was very good verse from you i shoulda been looking alot mroe cause your gettin better...damn good job...

opener: Mista
closer: shadow
metas: Mista
Imagery: Mista
flow: Shadow
stucture: shadow
creativty: Mista
win/ Mista
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