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Knock out kings fur life
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Voted For: •Para¶el•
this one was hard becuase you both did a good job congrats guys but sadly one has to win and I have to go with him, becuase his imagry and vocab was good opener-closure was good his emotion was a little better but you both had that but he had it as if I was in this topical and lived it myself these are the lines that helped him.
I didn’t have a disability, my life was just Structured
But in time when I started to grow up, the curse Cured
I learned more about life & the essence’s was Insured
The imagery was off and I couldn’t see the Picture
Other people might of thought I was just Immature
Some thought I needed ratlin but I was just Young
Compounded in the days of life, what went Wrong
8/10
rt the fav on da links
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