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Old 01-23-05, 10:58 PM   #21
Parallel
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Voted For: 50hater_killer

Complex:
not bad verse nice creativty and metas...alright stucture and vocab but you lacked just hitting with personals...it was more of a self glorified battle verse for you...i jsut wasent really feeling that try and diss him more..and try not to talk about guns and the president line was dumb jsut wasent feeling that at all...no hate

50hater_killer
not bad verse kinda lacked creativty but the metas were ight nothing to great the vocab was weak i just thought you used more personals to diss him thats pretty much the only reason you got this bassicly everything else was a tie n shit but you used better personls good job..pz

opener: 50
clsoer: comp
metas: 50
punches: none
stucutre: comp
flow: tie
personals: 50
win/ 50hater_killer
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