Man i was feelin this shit. You got your shit across hella well. Nice emotion. Flow was a little short at some points, but not too big of a deal.

This is some shit we can all relate to. It doesnt have to have happened, but we know what it would feel like if it did.

Nothin else wrong with it really... structure was fine... maybe up ya vocab a little but that happens with time.

9/10

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