Quality was very bad... flow was aight, but got irritating cuz u never switched it up, and u fell off a couple times which is aight.. you need to up ya lyrics tho.. emotion was really good however.. and ya voice sounds good.. not bad for a first but you need to learn a few things about quality in the audio assistance forum then you'd be coo and don't run outta breath tryna spit sum lines, adjust them for your beat as well as your pronounciation purposes.. once u elevate i c u doin' big thingz.. so i say props, work on ya errors and you'll be str8.. holla

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