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Old 01-24-05, 02:28 AM   #11
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Vote: DeathVision (kilo704)
I felt the emotion in kilo704's drop and i related to the themes he talked bout in his drop, it was deep - jus needs a lil elevation in vocab, i like the way it didnt rhyme it seemed more natural cos of the way its like ur jus talking - 8.5/10
Poetries drop was decent nuttin particularily wrong wid it, ecept its not cool to misspell words in poetry, use a spellchecker lol j/p gd structure et etc...work on more metaphorical ways if syin stuff so people get images in their head..-8/10

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