Ok Wasnt Much Creativity From Either Of You That Made Me Mad Fiya You Had Good Vocab Imagery Wasnt Good Emotion Was Decent I Wasnt Really Feeling Your Poem Here Like I Usually Do I Understood The Poem And Where You Were Trying To Go I Even Liked The Writing Of It But I Feel You Aint Write The Issue Properly Here It Seems Rushed.
Wicked Like I Said Neither Of Yall Had Creativity Much You Had Decent Vocab Could Be Better Metaphores Is What You Lack And Need To Work On Good Emotion And Imagery Here The Imagery Is What Set It Apart From Fiyas Poem Here I Liked How You Wrote It And Approached The Topic From A Nice Prospective I Was Really Feeling Your Poem More Here Even Though It Shouldve Been Longer And Stop Writing In That Color Its Fucking Annoying.
Vote-wicked Clown

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