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Voted For: .Wicked One.

siting thinkingwhat to righnt as i ponder my possible Ebonicz
so im sorry about my spellin im just took aa for phonicz
decent
now let see i im contesting this wicked one
so if i win don't be portestin don't pickin son
err…no here, flow needs to be longer
cuz if you try to go against me il slam ya like shaq
you'll be so mentally disorder you be jammin off track
okay, kinda good here
youll be hidin under table the when you hear about BIG E
so don't worry if i don't hit hard it not biggie
cuz you'll still be tha chump in my siggy
LOL….no mayn
so ill put my defensive down and and rip you up
cuz when you spit ur wicked rhymes ill trip you up
decent punch
and have you coplainn it your wrost battle ever
but still ill beat to the ground and you head severd
okay, nuttin good here
then i rape you mother wit a fish net rubber
father your brother and then another
no
ill have 3 kids and a dead step son
so ill stop now do i don 't kill ya rep son
decent closer, nuttin much

You could have Jonny Cochran write your battle.. you couldn't defeat me...
I'ma beat this bitch if he drops a "Line" like what Bobby does Whitney...

I'll leave ur condition critical,u with a gat that's Pitaful,damage from ur punches is minimal...
Don't fuck wit a convicted criminal my thoughts are passed subliminal with eatch syllable...
decent opener, flow was kinda long though
You said stop with smurff rhymes, Learn how to spell Loss, first...
I disperse worst and murk this net nerd,Send you to hell in a hearse...
nice multi’s here, decent punch
Battling me was your first mistake,
Second mistake trying to act MC when ur a fake Ill break ur mother's bones like eathquakes...
Ill give you nike Gloves a gun with a bulltet and you still couldn't do it for fuck sakes...
good punch
Please kid you think iam prewritin...
Manye, i gotta life kid, unlike you, cuz you prolly bit your verse off Mike Tyson...
…decent closer

overall, W.O. took this one, came harder in the punches
and had a better structure + flow