okay this was a great battle poetry wise

vocab- vocab goes to acuity because he used diverse words and nothin i saw was too repetitive

structure-this also goes 2 acuity because of that center alignment, it just makes it seem to flow better. i use it alot myself

rhyme scheme-both seemed to be basic A B rhyme schemes to me so i think this category isn't critical in this battle

intensity/emotion-acuity by far. it explains itself

my vote:Acuity

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