Voted For: .K.onfliktz

*Quality in the verse but how did they come off?*

.K.onfliktz: The thing that stood out the most about this verse never usually stands out in txt battles normally. -Was the flow. This was like reading an audio!
opener was sheer brilliance, I loved the breaking bread with pigeons and the praising wack!!
Close was very nice, good personal with the illiteracy, and nice play on the golf saying.
Structure was tighter than tight, no playing or stretching flowed like perfection. Punches were hard hitting and on a higher level.

.MictoriouS: This was a cool verse bro. i liked it.
Opener was weak i think, could have come a lot harder than that. Lines seemed stretched and the punch was a little off target.
Close was better, very nice multis and good punch.
Your verse had plenty nice multis and wordplay but ya punches were not near as hard. And your structure was quite off too.

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