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Voted For: •Para¶el•
•Para¶el•:your storyline was pretty good here,
and you practically stayed on topic on this piece here
Vocab was nice, hardly any mistakes, had a good balance
between the complex and basic shit here. The emotion
on ur drop was there, could've used a little more imagery,
but it was all good here. Your structure was in place and
not stretched everywhere and your flow was good too.
But overall you had a good drop...
Personify: Your structure was aight in ur drop,
the flow was pretty good, and the vocab was good here
too. Nice storyline by you, but overall you had a good drop
also, nutting much though
Overall: Kind of a close battle here, but •Para¶el• took
this one though, just had a better drop to it...
No Hate To You Though Personify
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