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Old 01-24-05, 07:07 PM   #12
NeptuneHurricane
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Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

I hated both verses, but at least yours contained punches. Phive man, quit focusing on the mutlies and try and work more punches in there.

Liked the porn addict line, but then again, I've seen it before...
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