I'm gonna tell you why you didn't win.
You didn't have punches..or very little that weren't affective. Can you honestly say, you look at your verse and say 'Damn, that was creative' or 'Damn, that was hot!'


Your '10 lines' are not at all 10 lines..that's like fuckin 30 with 10 slashes in it. Can you read that and say 'this sounds good' No, you can't

Think about that, and improve. I'm not being mean, I'm telling you the truth.

Uppin.