Voted For: Phantom

well you get this win....


FLOW: you had some nice lines and nice multies but your metaphores where not all that great......your bet line was the one about ali holding a globe......i liked that but that was the only line that i liked..... just work on your punches and metaphores...you could also work on personals..... if oyu had atleast one more bar of a nice ass metaphorical persasonal than you would have won.....also your structure was offf a lil bit....

PHANTOM: you had my attention the whole time...i love personals....it shows that you have real skill becuase you cant prewrite a personal...or bite a personal......so you good job with the personals.......you almost lost this battle becuase that FLWO...line didnt really work becuase thats not how you spell FLOW......but yeah nice metaphores and nice punches........good battle...nice structure.......we all no you mastered text no start with the AUDIO................

vote=phantom

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