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Old 01-25-05, 05:19 AM   #6
MaRVJay
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Voted For: WerdSmith

lmaooo whut da fukk@meta's verse....fam half ya shit wasn't even ryhmin u lost rite there damm i thought u was a vet on dis bitch....werdsmith u got lucky fam ya verse was kind of weak 2 i didn't really c no creativity or punchlines and ya ryhme scheme was kind of weak...but u take dis cuzz meta's verse was horrible no hate fam just speakind a truth nahmean

opener-werd...i didn't get it but da shit sounded betta than meta's make u lean back like petey crack lmaooo wow

structure-werd..both of u had some stretched shit but werds looked betta

punchlines-a tie both of u had some weak shits

personals-nun from both damm....

ehuff said return da favor ya'll
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