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Old 01-25-05, 05:30 AM   #36
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Tha Sickness

damm i give dis 2 u fam ...ya verse was kind of hott even tho it was shorter than gutta's u had a couple creative punchlines..no personals or multis and ya structure was cool...gutta whuts good fam y u stay talkin about "black chuck tailors"??? lol damm dat aint 4 dis type of rappin...u had a solid verse nothin really stood out from ya shit

opener-sick
structure-a tie
punchlines-sick
creativity-sick
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-gutta
finisher-gutta
enjoyed-sick.....like i said he came with da betta verse


return da favor ya'll
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