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Old 01-25-05, 08:04 AM   #8
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Voted For: CounTREE Jay

This aint a hate vote. I wanted to vote for Marvejay cos his verse was dope and i wanted to show im fair. BUT then i read countreejay's verse.........

MarveJay: Some real good multis and metas with a lot of hard hitting punches. Your vocab was good and flow was cool. Strcture was good, i think some lines only stetched cos of the bold text. Your biggest problem was you tried too hard to get the multis in your punches lacked in power and this is a battle not an open mic. Nonetheless a real good verse, giving me second thoughts as to whether i ever wanna battle you. lol

best bar: "go reach 4 my crown im squeezin pound n u meetin da ground
ya moms a hoe she like "homeless ppl" do alot of "sleepin around"
-This was cool


Countree Jay: Im not that familiar wiv ya work and i seen you floating bout RV and i must say you are fucking dope!!!! Metas coming in quick, your punches were out of this world! some real hard hitters that were all on target with some cool personals. Structure was cool making it nice flowing, easy to read and enjoyable.
-One day im gon be this good.

best bar: "Another NYC M.C., confusin' hip-hop wit tales of comin' from the gutter,
Stay talkin' bout toast, and can't believe your shit still ain't butter."
-aah nice one!
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