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Old 01-25-05, 08:14 AM   #18
Dex
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Voted For: JpMoNeY06

Good battle in my eyes. breaks down like this:

JpMoNeY06: Your structure was totally fucked up man. It took me a little while to readit but once i got used to it i liked it defo. Some nice ounces and your flow was real good. Some good personals in this two. -The best advice you can get right now is press return wen you finish a line and start a new line. Peeps wont be voting for you cos some gon be too lazy to read ya shit man. -Kay bro hope that helps ya.

best bar: drop a verse like it ain't nuttin/
bitches like you r why they made up the word FRONTIN
-This was a cool bar, there was more but i liked this loads.


Chi: Was ok man, seemed a lot more basic than ive seen of you tho. vocab was ok but could have been better. Punches were ok but could have definately come harder. Structure was good and flow was aight.

best bar:"This nigga jacks off 2 gay porn on da internet,
poor nigga all his shit at home is a renter set/"
-Cool, some might think its primitive but i liked it.

Stay up peeps.
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