i liked this one very creative.....good hook i liked the emotion and imagery you gave the hook very good.....for all the verses together it was very good stucture and flowed and good vocabulary and creativty with metaphores and just dope...good imagery it was all pretty good..i was feeling the emotion alot and the vocab brought it out alot better...this was a hella good peice...keep it up

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