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Old 01-25-05, 06:15 PM   #7
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Normal Punches-MaRVJay1009, pretty good punches. Bi punches are played, but other than that. Kamikazee, only a few punches, rest were self glorification.

Personal Punches-MaRVJay1009, some personals. They were ok but work on more of them, and harder hitting. Kamikazee, nothing to rate.

Metaphors-MaRVJay1009, ok metaphors. Not much to say really. Kamikazee, played metaphors, work on em.

Multiple Rhymes-MaRVJay1009, you had them. Kamikazee, none.

Structure-MaRVJay1009, a lot better structure. Not nearly as many stretched lines, but still too many. Kamikazee, bad structure. Work on your stretched lines.

Flow-MaRVJay1009, decent flow. Fell off sometimes though. Kamikazee, not that great of flow. Fell off too many times.

Word Play-MaRVJay1009, you had some.

MaRVJay1009, aight drop. Work on more personals and better wordplay.

Kamikazee, work on punches. Most of your "punches" were self glorification. Try some personals as well.

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