yea this is a real heartfelt track.......chorus was pretty coo.......lyrics are good....flow was pretty solid throughout this......there was just this one part at the end of your third verse were you just kinda stopped.......but other than that i got the message you were trying to get across.....lyrics were good....delivery was good.......only thing i would recomened is turning down your voice overs/doubles or whatever turn em down just a little bit more.

overall this was a pretty good track