its alright not to much emotion in it but the imagery was good and so was the stucture i liked the first verse more then the 2nd part of it but you seemed to lack emotion and vocabulary try working that into your verse if you had vocabulary and emotion both in there alot more you would prob be one of the better topical heads on this site...or jsut dope...iunno but anyway good flow and the imagery was great good creativty...this was a alrighty peice....good job..

yo man check my single Until The End you might learn some stuff like emotion but i think you know it you jsut dont do it lots but i use lots of vocab...or if you wanna really see my skills look at my battle vs. Personify i can do better but i knwo what i need to win...but yea link for the OM's check the sig...my battles are in EFL..im not saying for you to vote im asking you to check it out maybe leave feed dont matter