leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: shadow
straight up i wasnt feelin either drop, shadow it was simple...but ok....vocab needs werk, n same with emotion...
good points was ya ryhme scheme...which kept my attention focused..overall 6.5/10........
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blah your name,lol...needs more feeling n vocab n try to stay on the topic..
i wasnt feelin anything you wrote,..srrry son, stay up n keep tryin your ryhmin was way off....n so was ya overall readin appeal
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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