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Old 01-26-05, 09:06 AM   #37
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Voted For: Tha Sickness

how does J gutta have three votes? prolly all dickriders... J you dont have any wordplay and you talk about what you do(killin and stuff like that) and you talk about his mom thats retarded and beyond played. sayin how (gutta) you are isn't battleing... its wordplay and punches.
godfather... you got this with alot of wordplay, but try directing more of your wordplay as punches instead of just sayin stuffya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/
this battles like 'glass' ill be the victor, that much is 'clear'/
^^^this is dope wordplay, callin him a biter, see thats a punch as well.

ya 'vocal box', and ya 'mind' must be broken/
cuz when you 'think' about a rhyme, all i 'hear' is 'Choken'/
^^^decent, because it was worplay and a punch, but it was a made up punch, doesn't hit as hard.

so you think you can defeat my sickness 'Ayy'/
im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (
^^real good wordplay agian, but this is the worst line maybe out of yours because its not a punch and not makin fun of the other guy.
decent drop, just try directing you punches more.
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