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Old 01-26-05, 01:33 PM   #18
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That Was Hott Fams...
I Was Really Feeling The Concept And The Emotion...
This Was A Real Original Topic Aswell...
Not Something Seen Very Often...
Uuuum, The Hook Was Hot As Fuck...
Could Def See That Sounded Good On Audio...
The Vocabulary Was On Point...
Verse Structure And Drop Structure Were Flawless...

Now The Negatives...
Only Thing I Really Have To Complain About It Some Rhyming...
Some Of The Flow In The Beging Was Off...
It Didnt Rhyme At All At Times And Other Times It Was Forced...
Other Than That Everything Was On Point Fams...

Real Nice Piece...
Stay Up Fams And Sorry It Took So Long Check This...
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