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Old 01-26-05, 03:23 PM   #9
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This verse had potential in fact, I know you didn't really put too much effort in it but I liked your approach of the topic. Good imagery, tight vocab, nice wordplay...You had the basic shit on lock so might work this out as an open mic or something? It'd be a waste otherwise...just an idea...

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