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Old 01-26-05, 03:33 PM   #15
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

SV got the whole bag.
SV:You came with the emotion, and the depth drawed me into the story even more.
Your structure was on point, so no problem's in following the verse.
Nice vocabulary, which is important in topical's.
Keep it up.

50:You didn't really post a proper verse, lack of depth, vocab and length, just improve your vocab and try to amplify your emotion..
So overall my vote goes to SV.
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