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Old 01-26-05, 05:01 PM   #501
DeHotBwoy
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thats a girl damn u tight juss dont rhyme three times like 3 lines rhyme than just change it it dont work it sound bad like

yeah im sickkkkk blah blah blah u can stop
blah blah blah blha blha the tightest fan hood hop
hadhaudhau hblah blah blah sicker than wood shop
and than fuck you im sick and you like me im like MONEY

right there u cant just change it it sound stupid just give advice.... H/B ... p.s H/b Holla back
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