Thread: Damian vs Phive
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Old 01-26-05, 06:08 PM   #26
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Voted For: Damian

phive
well ok first of all your stucture was pretty weak and it made me go damn i dont understand a word...and the flow lacked as well....you had no decent punches or anything creative to your verse i jsut felt you had nothin at all to win this....use more vocab and metaphores...give you tight punches..but you lacked punches...no hate

Damian
alright i liked your verse alot more....good stucture decent punches.....i just liked the way you worded it better...btter vocab just had a better wittiness to it.....good battle for you, you will win this easy i think...

opener: D
closer: D
punches: D
creativty: D
metas: D
stucture: D
flow: D
...win: Damian
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